Re-writing my report from scratch is going to make me start from square one. I have read the assignment in more detail. Re-writing everything could be viewed as a bad thing, I believe that it has given me the opportunity to do better and keep getting better throughout the course. Being out of school for over 10 years, you could say I am getting my feet wet with this rough draft. I have opened all of the sample reports and printed them out. I’ve read each one, and have a better knowledge of what is being written by other students and how to better prepare and write my report. Upon looking at these I see that the students have pulled from other sources not just listed on the course mind map. I missed a huge component in J.H. Kellogg’s health process. His development of Kellogg’s corn flakes with his brother. This was a big part that I missed completely. Also to include more of a back story on whom Kellogg was. What Kellogg was about and what he did with his life. Not just professionally but in family and extracurricular activities. List more health related things pertaining to the fleshless diet, thoughts on keeping all bad things out of the body. Why humans pay more attention to what is fed to animals and are more conscious about what is going to them. How in the 1900’s people were more into eating meat and it has only gotten more prevalent over the years. Now in 2000’s there are a lot more people going the route of a vegetarian or a vegan versus a meat eater. How many celebrities are today taking on vegetarianism and also passing that onto their children. Talk about the pluses and minuses of being 100% vegetarian. How when leaving out meat you are also leaving out essential vitamins to your diet.
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