Dear Group members. Please review my presentation and use the critique sheet Dr. Archibald has provided to give me feedback so that I can improve the presentation.
Title Slide: Your title slide looks great - the font, the border around the outside, the little symbol under your title, etc. It all looks really good!
Intro, Body, Conclusion Slides - I think you should make the photos and the text much bigger, and cut back on the words. Use a few powerful words on each slide that will really support what you are saying (in the notes).
Powerpoint - Again, I love the title slide, it looks super professional and elegant. I think maybe you should just have the black border around the title slide though (and maybe the works cited slides) and take it off of the rest of the slides. The heartbeat sound you use is a good idea, too. As I mentioned earlier, I would suggest increasing font & photo sizes for sure; also, you might try using different colors on different slides. For example, you could use red on the "bad" slides and blue or green or something else on the "good" slides.
Presentation - The notes on Slide #6 are just a repeat of the text on that slide, and Slide #7 doesn't have any notes. Some of the other slides notes could use some more detail as well.
Citations - Your citations look good; they are done properly and in the right format.
Title Slide: It's simple and elegant. Not too distracting with all the necessary information.
Intro, Body, Conclusion Slides/Powerpoint - Good sparse information that can be easily seen and elaborated on.
Presentation - Some slides don't have notes at all. Try having them in bullet points instead of full sentences. The pictures and sound added to the show and helped with comprehension.
Natasha Mosier - Presentation Draft Review
ReplyDeleteTitle Slide: Your title slide looks great - the font, the border around the outside, the little symbol under your title, etc. It all looks really good!
Intro, Body, Conclusion Slides - I think you should make the photos and the text much bigger, and cut back on the words. Use a few powerful words on each slide that will really support what you are saying (in the notes).
Powerpoint - Again, I love the title slide, it looks super professional and elegant. I think maybe you should just have the black border around the title slide though (and maybe the works cited slides) and take it off of the rest of the slides. The heartbeat sound you use is a good idea, too. As I mentioned earlier, I would suggest increasing font & photo sizes for sure; also, you might try using different colors on different slides. For example, you could use red on the "bad" slides and blue or green or something else on the "good" slides.
Presentation - The notes on Slide #6 are just a repeat of the text on that slide, and Slide #7 doesn't have any notes. Some of the other slides notes could use some more detail as well.
Citations - Your citations look good; they are done properly and in the right format.
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ReplyDeleteNatasha Mosier - Presentation Draft Review
ReplyDeleteTitle Slide: It's simple and elegant. Not too distracting with all the necessary information.
Intro, Body, Conclusion Slides/Powerpoint -
Good sparse information that can be easily seen and elaborated on.
Presentation - Some slides don't have notes at all. Try having them in bullet points instead of full sentences.
The pictures and sound added to the show and helped with comprehension.
Citations - Looks good.
FYI- this should be a page to comment, not a post.
ReplyDeleteNatasha Mosier- presentation draft review
Title slide- Everything is included that is required.
Intro, Body, Conclusion- Elaborates on information, but not much over what is shown on slide.
Presentation- Graphics look to be attention keeping
Citations- no problem noticed with them